My best translation in Latin

My best translation was in Stage 7 reading 1. I chose this translation because this is where I really had difficulty with everything I learned. I was getting confused by all of the cases, verb endings, and subject-verb agreements. But this reading shows how I was determined to get it correct. I was determined to learn what I got wrong and to rectify the problem. In the second paragraph, the dialogue was where I had the most trouble. It was put into a weird form and I had trouble formulating a sentence. But after every revision, I kept on seeing my errors. I knew what I did and I tried my best to fix it. I would soon after get the hang of using the right endings and how to formulate sentences.